A small garden, lush with flowers
Pinks and whites and lavenders
Specked with candles in colored glass
Strolled two young and handsome lovers.
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Sophia, your poem is brilliant. Very romantic and full of beautiful images. Well done!
Very nice. The last stanza is the best-I think-for it frames the speaker's perspective. Well done. Context, context, and context.....
Outstanding imagery, you have a splendid talent.Well done Patricia Gale
what an enchanting poem, absolutely beautiful. i'm glad that there is still some romance left in the world. 'you old romantic'. i hope that you get your chance to be that girl in the garden. x