Saturday, December 28, 2019

An Angel And A Devil Comments

Rating: 4.8

My little Angel is always with me
She lives inside me
In the four chambers of my heart
In all four corners of my head.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 27 March 2020

four chambers of my heart......beautiful. anjandev roy.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 January 2020

Such a sweet Angel! The little Angel who flits through the inner chambers of the heart is full of light and ever loving. She is never distracted or swayed by the devil. She remains her pure self. Simply loved this wonderful poem, dear Poetess Rose.......10

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Kesav Easwaran 23 January 2020

Your protective Angel. Honestly introspective. Good write Rose Marie 10+

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Unwritten Soul 10 January 2020

Sound soft and wrapped with beautiful feeling, secured. The title really captured the content...the angel win when devil tries to speak.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2020

book, a book that impresses kids of 3-4 years, sure, I regard my Mum as a very wise lady. Here comes I cited your first stanza: My little Angel is always with me She lives inside me In the four chambers of my heart In all four corners of my head...................in the whole embodiment. This is the very core of our true being,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2020

This poem goes to myPoemList. A 10 Full Score and much much more for this magnificent and powerful poem I will cite here the first stanza of this sweet poetry, such a true gem within, As a child of 4 my Mum gave me a book with great pictures about The Angel and The Devil, in fact pictures in pages with text to be coloured, since my Mum knows that I love to colour all things, this is a book with pictures drawn by the writer, a huge but light

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2020

An Angel constantly wins from a devil, how little the Angel might be, the Angel will win perpetually. An amazing poem, excellently created and powerfully worded. A poem brillianly weaved and loveliest presented as the constant fight inside us all between the good and the worst, a powerful prose poem telling us that we finally will always win IF we keep intruders outside our doors.

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Shaun Cronick 01 January 2020

The ying and yang of life forever fought and so beautifully written with great sentiment. Thank you for sharing this shining gem Rose Marie 10++ and added to my treasure chest which is never dusty with your good self around. Wishing you and the loved ones around you a Wondrous and Happy New Year.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 December 2019

It conveys the message of firm steadiness in winning over temptations in this world. I love it, dear ate RoseπŸ’•β€οΈπŸ™πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜...10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2019

The ways of the Devil is always against us! ! ! But, we have to stand firm with the truth! Without giving up. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 December 2019

Oh what will this world do without this angel, this sentinel of human sanity, lovely read dear poet

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Akhtar Jawad 28 December 2019

The little Angel is mighty enough to fight the devil and it will win always. A nice metaphor.

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Sandra Feldman 28 December 2019

No little devil would be able to change you, For your little Angel is quite the strongest Of the two. An adorable poem, so pleasant and fluid, with such sweet internal and sincere beauty. A pleasure to read and keep.

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Bill Cantrell 28 December 2019

Oh how our imperfections opens gates of desires to forbidden zones, yet the following of lights voice leads to peace, wonderful poem! !

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Anjandev Roy 28 December 2019

Brilliant piece, as usual. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 28 December 2019

The inner struggle between good and evil never tasted so sweet!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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