Friday, February 15, 2013

An Angel And A Beast In Me! Comments

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Reared it, since it was a babe,
At first, it barked and mewed for comfort,
Pacifiers of ‘keep quiet' was put into its mouth,
As I grew, it was growing within me,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Valsa George 18 February 2013

A beast and an angel coexist in us, but we have to constantly check out who gains predominence over the other! ! A great poem! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 16 February 2013

A nice twist to the Angel and the Beast! ! It amply shows you are not hurting anybody which is the best part! ! Thanks! ! A lovely write! !

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Hardik Vaidya 15 February 2013

Who said I got hurt? And by you or any body else, mthats the crux of your poem, nirvana. I got hurt because I was what I chose to be vulnerable to the angle and the devil both. If I were not vulnerable I would not be alive. What's life living like a rhino? Brilliant veeraiyah.

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Dave Walker 15 February 2013

A great poem, We all have two sides to us. A great write.

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