An Angel Comments

Good use of repetition, its very effective. A couple suggestions though. The 'broken heart' phase in the third stanza is pretty cliche. Its a tired phase, and is only bringing the rest of the poem down. The two times you use 'that' in the 10 and 12 stanzas probably could be cut out. Poetry is all about compression, it's always good to look ways to cut away needless while still keeping to what you are trying to express. Good ending.

I believe in guardian angels, too.This is a very lovely poem about your spirit friend.I've yet to write a poem of such great love for my 'Best Friend' a ten from me.And you have great potential as a poet.

it looks like you really fell in love with this angel.. hmmm... btw, have you found your real angel? let me be the first to subsribe then.. hehe