Tuesday, July 30, 2013

An Ancient Mystery Comments

Rating: 4.8

An incomplete script
more evocative
more challenging
and more interesting
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adheez van der beanthz
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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 August 2013

Well said, Life is an incomplete manuscript and it is the mystery! Nice poem!

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Unwritten Soul 12 August 2013

Because mystery is always fascinating! and story always behind it, that make it more interesting_Soul

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Savita Tyagi 11 August 2013

Excellent write! Short yet full of depth.

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Patricia Grantham 11 August 2013

Just like reading a good book and finding out at the last moment that some of the pages had been torn out. Putting pieces together like a jigsaw puzzle and getting the whole picture. Good write.

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Hazel Durham 11 August 2013

The future is always tantalizing with it's untold tale yet to unfold!

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Maria C. Pires Costa 11 August 2013

This is a brief but certainly very meaningful thread! It is likely the poet to recall a time of an incomplete manuscript that he might have written, and, for some good reason, it keeps resonating in his mind and heart as a milestone. May the poet enjoy many lifetime stories ahead to be written/shared with us, dedicated readers. Best regards, Adheez

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 August 2013

intriguing mysterious please enlighten me

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R.j. Wynn 07 August 2013

Awesome and said so eloquently.

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Ramesh T A 07 August 2013

Increasing curiosity to know full script! If developed further into a complete work it will be still more interesting to read!

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Danny Draper 05 August 2013

There is truth here, sometimes a chapter is more than enough.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 04 August 2013

brief but nice, I like this

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Lucifera Santez 03 August 2013

challenging and mysterious. a very intriguing write. :)

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Ramesh Rai 02 August 2013

beautiful write. liked your write

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Amitava Mazumdar 31 July 2013

a very small and precise effort. good one.

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Tribhawan Kaul 31 July 2013

A thoughtful poem. Incompleteness itself poses lot of challenges. Beautiful.

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Danny Draper 31 July 2013

Similarly a wreck is more interesting than a seaworthy ship. Incomplete and intriguing. A fine thought in this succinct piece.

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

It hands to the mystery when one has to search for the full meaning. A great poem.

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