An Ancient Artform Comments

Nice work. Love poems aren't easy, and you've deftly managed to avoid the pitfalls here. This is a moment made clear and accurate, accessible to the reader, and well-made.

This is a wonder piece Pat and really I would have expected it from an older head. What is great about this is that it is begging the question of what is the artform; is it the playing of an lp? the act of seduction? or the end result. You have contained a wonderful mystery here and illustrated the value of titles as well as the works.

Pat your definitely one gifted guy, youll always amaze me, we have some deep chats, sweet poem. Mason

fine lines flowing one into the other memory leaping into impulse and that ultimate surprise of sweetness the kiss a fine poem