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good & spirited one. go on writing

I went and found myself a muse, her presence small and spirit bright I cannot refuse her slightest whims. lovely thought.

It wasn't conquest that I sought, just love, not war, this truth survives, my words that pageant throughout time complete surrender best describes. poem bounded with the threads of love, love & love....deep & innovative, great job Sir

I really adore this one. A real touching write, it invokes undertones of a very deep love and passion. A great write.

Well captain, is it the far thing you worry about, you are a pirate and have a ship..do sail and in every move it makes you come closer to the one who amuse your mind...nice poem captain Ai Ai captain_Soul