Mark Arvizu

Mark Arvizu

Ciudad De Los Angeles, California
Thursday, July 25, 2013

An American Phenomenon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lay the board down drive over the spikes
Let your friends out of the trunk where they hide
Travel the humps and bumps to the perfect place
There’s room for you there its just enough space
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 March 2015

If I got you right, Arvizu, you have contrasted here the American way of life housed under a corrugated phenomenon and the beauty of the starry heavens beyond. The last line demands a lot of thinking. I can't yet say I understood it. But it has immense beauty and poetry is all about that beauty. (10)

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Mark Arvizu

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