Wednesday, November 25, 2009

An Ambition Comments

Rating: 3.1

May I begin with an ambition
In my space with cold corners
Where my keys are lost every day
To the humming voice of refrigerator
...
Read full text

Sadiqullah Khan
COMMENTS
Reshma Ramesh 14 December 2009

beautiful sadiq.......................

0 0 Reply
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 December 2009

This is a beautiful poem, Sadiq, a bit symbolic but a good example of broken imagery. Best wishes. Naseer

0 0 Reply
C. P. Sharma 07 December 2009

'On the top of hills the falcons bow' Great and symbolic. CP

0 0 Reply
Lady Grace 05 December 2009

the thought is directly ends with the statement.....that 'ambition is to be studied''...

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 04 December 2009

'The way out is across the window'...yes; and you lead us through a beautiful way...to a beautiful poetic way...10

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

lots of images painted here...wonderful poem! ! !

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success