Tuesday, August 19, 2014

An Amazing Sculptor Comments

Rating: 5.0


Keeping everybody
With an utter surprise,
Very slowly they sip in.
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Amitava Sur
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Bri Edwards 29 March 2015

my favorite lines: That even a saint is tilted and lost Being struck by those illustrious curves. ...........well, i guess saints are/were humans too. are we talking just about male saints? ? christian saints? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Very slowly they sip in. ...............if you use sip, i don't follow your meaning. how about slip? cavernous cave! ..............is this poem X-rated? and i wish you would illustrate the illustrious curves for me. please! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) i think some girls (in their 20s and 30s) are still waiting for bumps to appear, well, at least bumps that require more than a sports bra! but i've heard it said that more than a handful? is a waste. and who sculpted Michelangelo's David's model? ? no, i wasn't alive THEN. bri :) p.s. i think in deed (rather than indeed) must be the influence of British English.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 August 2014

Great imagery......yes a hormone called estrogen makes this beauty possible.....truly a great sculptor............ very nicely composed with a surprising ending.............. Amitavaji........

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2014

Amazing. That surprising ending tipped the whole scale. Cheers and hats off to your imagination. Smiles all over.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Wonderful poem. Really Amazing sculptor you have carved with the stupendous words. Captivating lines... That even a saint is tilted on seeing it. Marvellous.... Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 August 2014

The most beautiful sculpture, no doubt, nobody will disagree, the climax of nature's art.

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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2014

An amazing poem here unveils the portrait of an amazing sculptor! A unique poem that sounds romantic and captivating all throughout. Amiitavaji, you are going to assert yourself in the PH in a short time.

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