Wednesday, September 16, 2015

An Amazing Flight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Perched high on a tree branch roosts the bird alone
Her flock scattered across the valley
Some flying high in sky, some gathering seeds on ground
Her eyes roll over to green meadows
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Savita Tyagi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 August 2021

A wonderful poem dear mam! Liked it

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Rajnish Manga 05 October 2015

Inspired by real life situations, the poem brings about realities and emotions attached thereto. I fondly quote the following lines: Her nest.... / Carries the sound of her own voice like that of a stranger.... / Laid her tender memories gently to rest and flew away free

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

A marvellous poem having thrilling expression. Brilliant speculation. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 September 2015

Verily, a heart touching poem, ...........10

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Valsa George 18 September 2015

The empty nest is symbolic of a sense of loneliness the parents experience once the fledglings have flown away! The mother bird particularly will be experiencing mixed feelings of joy and sorrow. Her heart will be always with the little ones who have flown away. This weighs her down and restricts her free movement! Enjoyed this highly symbolic write, Savita!

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Kelly Kurt 16 September 2015

I am glad that you found this and posted it, Savita. It is a beautiful poem and speaks of a mother's love and loneliness of an empty nest.

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Mark Heathcote 16 September 2015

Very nicely written I enjoyed it thanks for sharing it.

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