Wednesday, September 30, 2009

An Amateur And Paradise Comments

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I spent a day in the corner of paradise
It thought me how to be a bit wise
I stole an everlasting memory from there
Excited, I ran wild as a hare
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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

I see a beautiful paradise. Any reader would be tempted to have a real glance.

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Salu Salu 11 October 2009

imagination has no barriers..looking forward for ur skyhigh journey...... rgrds/salu

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Philip Winchester 05 October 2009

You write as you have the skills of a Poet of Eighty Years of Age. I read your Prose in Awe you my 'Friend' are truely 'Gifted' It is a pleasure to measure. By the Pupil one can be Taught. Kindest Regards Philip

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Mubeen Sadhika 02 October 2009

Matured language. Nicely composed.

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Eyan Desir 01 October 2009

Very beautiful well wonderfully written.. 10ss

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 30 September 2009

what a lovely poem...this poem itself has love as its rhythm...a lovely vision of nature...a baby's vision which is filled with love which out pours...this poem inspired me to write one when i post it i will tell you...into my favs

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