Tuesday, December 23, 2014

An Allusive Pause Comments

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An allusive pause
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I walk in solitude
Amongst trees abound
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 26 December 2014

beautiful nature poem ....really visualized..nice

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Akhtar Jawad 24 December 2014

For beauty in this word the time is autumn anyone who protects beauty in any form or adds some beauty in this crucial time is better than an angel..............10

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Valsa George 23 December 2014

The leaf represents beauty and virtue! It has now fallen with the stir of the autumn breeze and you would like to treasure it and never allow it to rot ! This waif will be hereafter preserved neatly in the pages of your book! Enjoyed reading your poem showing your enthusiasm to preserve beauty and virtue!

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