I met an alien from beyond
Beyond the plane where I could reach
He landed in a carriage
With wheels of warming words and thoughts
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alien...yes; what was alien there? the feeling of love! raw, first time, as never before! poem mystically romantic and more-than-symbolic...good work Sandhya...10
romance in its purest form...agree with Ted and waiting for the second part :) thanks for sharing. A.
vowww! what an imagination! You are really a Romantic. When is the sequel going to be released? Part II
A great dream. Romantic. I think this unlived life is sweeter than the lived. Beautiful imageries
this is yet another wonderfull piece from redoubtable poet sandhya. this time around a certain mystery has been added. words and lines are very good. in total it gives a nice feel.love this poem voted 10 surya
This is an interesting and nicely written poem on a challenging subject, one that you do not see very often, although I have written on aliens mating with earth women and men several times, Sandhya, in what I like to call Sci-Fi poems. This, however is more of a romantic poem than a Sci-Fi poem, and I enjoyed reading it, as it's very well expressed. Carl.
Your poem is on 'wheels of warm words' and generate 'love passions'. Beautiful...............Pls find some of my writings in this site. Best regards, sam varghis