Sunday, August 12, 2012

An Alien Truth Comments

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Once, i came to an alien truth
Of life and love internally
Of peace and joy internally
Those things unseen
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Bolami lawal
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Captain Cur 13 August 2012

A stong write. I liked your title choice. Repetition adds to the message of the poem.

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