Sunday, January 8, 2006

An Alien's Valentine Comments

Rating: 2.8

Come be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy;
I'll give you babies, one, two, three,
A girl, an alien, and a boy.
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John Thorkild Ellison
COMMENTS
David Desantis 15 May 2008

haha cool man. Very fun as greenwolf said...the rhyme scheme was also excellent, and I love how you fit in the baby alien mention...slightly quirky as i think all good poetry should be lol 10/10

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2008

Well done, my man. Fun, the way poetry should be. GW62

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Chuck Audette 06 October 2006

Would that be an illegal or legal alien? Very fun! - chuck

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Esther Leclerc 06 October 2006

Mondo-bizarro fun, John! Let's see whatcha got for Halloween! ! ! Esther : ]

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Preeti - is here! 27 July 2006

That was quite interesting! Preets

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Moya Levy 09 January 2006

I'm enjoying reading your poems John, this one especially! ! Moyaxx

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