Monday, March 20, 2017

An Alien Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

He observed constellations,
I was bewitched by stars.
Moon was my paramour,
He dreamt of being an astronaut.
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Payal Priya
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Chinedu Dike 04 April 2018

Free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Payal.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 05 January 2018

I in coloured wings of a butterfly. He studied about asteroids, I was a meteorite. I found myself in verses, He looked for theories and facts. Great imagination your poem thanks madam for your nice poem shearing 10++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2017

We two searched for life - He in other planets, I in coloured wings of a butterfly I found myself in verses, He looked for theories and facts. a beautiful descripiton of the two worlds in a relationship............ thank you for your poetic mind. beautiful! ! !

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Payal Priya 30 March 2017

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment

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Payal Priya 25 March 2017

Glad that you took out time to read my poems and appreciated my effort...Thank you Edward ☺

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2017

Coloured wings! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Payal Priya 22 March 2017

Thanks Robert .Your word are always encouraging and your poems inspiring ☺

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Payal Priya 22 March 2017

Thank you Daniel .Glad that you enjoyed reading.☺

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Daniel Jones 20 March 2017

Wonderful! Really enjoyed reading.

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