Saturday, December 5, 2015

An Alcoholic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Funny the way things turn out
Where had your dreams got lost
You had your life before you
Knowing now this is your lot
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Daniel Bernard Kelleher
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Mj Lemon 31 March 2020

A very moving work...so much of life change when that first social drink becomes something so much more. This poem goes to myfavourties.

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Norah Tunney 11 April 2016

Yes Daniel its a real problem for some people Dreams get lost Good that you writing about it

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Daniel Kelleher 12 April 2016

A close relative of mine was one but hasn't had a drink for years, thank God, Thank you for comment Norah

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Margaret O Driscoll 17 December 2015

Alcoholism is so damaging to one and all, well done

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Daniel Kelleher 17 December 2015

Alcoholics don't see the damage untl its to late, Thank you Margaret

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Spock The Vegan 05 December 2015

Good writing. Taking that first drink My life ruined for evermore. It happens.

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Daniel Kelleher 07 December 2015

It happened to a friend of mine, Thank you Spock for your comment

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Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Cork, Ireland
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