Tuesday, December 2, 2014

An Aimless Race Comments

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Strange is the world stranger human ways
A sea of humanity in torrent of a race;
Where lame and healthy are all in chase:
Tottering or stumbling they all run
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Om Chawla
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Kavya . 11 December 2014

a v meaningful poem..yes strange is the world...strange are the human ways

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Valsa George 07 December 2014

If we remain aloof from the jostling crowd and simply watch humanity's torrent of race, all these thoughts will course through our mind... We will be made to wonder where all this mad crowd is heading to and what did they finally achieve! We will have to conclude that this mad hurry is not going to bring us any substantial gains! But unfortunately we never prefer to be a passive spectator! We also join the race and never care to slow down to lift up those who have fallen! I thoroughly enjoyed your blunt analysis of the present scenario of mad rush and divided aims!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2014

Strange is the world stranger human ways A sea of humanity in torrent of a race; Beautiful narration and expression is very fine in this poem. Nice piece of work shared on.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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