Tuesday, February 3, 2009

An Afterthought To Your Affections Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you really feel anything for me?
Or am I just an afterthought to your affections
Familiarly there, tolerated like old furniture
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Anita Atina
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Al Ramos 20 October 2009

Sometimes relationships just fade away when we are not looking and taking them for granted. Good job.

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Richard Blanch 08 February 2009

Diffewrent again, and quite raw, and yet of course still controlled and euphonious: I love Empty echoes are all that rebound and Careless contempt,

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LOVEFOOL Aka 03 February 2009

Good write' sad and dripping with emotion 10+

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