Thursday, January 1, 2004

An Afternoon Comments

Rating: 3.1

As he writes, without looking at the sea,
he feels the tip of his pen begin to tremble.
The tide is going out across the shingle.
But it isn't that. No,
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Raymond Clevie Carver
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Andrew Hoellering 05 June 2009

Carver wrote great short stories, but I didn't realise he was also a fine poet. What I admire about this poem is that it is conversational and unforced with something worthwhile to communicate. It is also subtle. The sea is not at the full and the woman is not at her best, but her smile triggers a memory of when they both were. The parallel is stronger for not being spelt out.Wonderful stuff! Thank you, whoever sent in these poems anonymously.

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