Sunday, May 31, 2015

An Affidavit Of Vows Comments

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I, a poet having no recognition and no worth,
Do hereby, solemnly affirm and state on oath,
That, your love, I see in your creature, is my only wealth.
That, my thirsty eyes, off course the both,
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Bharati Nayak 23 July 2015

Where at I see your image my God The converged point is a heart in love- - - - - - - Love emanates from God as a gift to dwell in the heart of a lover.

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Bisma Mirza 02 June 2015

An Amazing poem.............. lovely! ! 10 on 10

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Valsa George 01 June 2015

Where all streams of love meet, sure there is God! All love emanates from Him.....! . When you make this vow, you are becoming the true son of God....! But who said you have no recognition and no worth as a poet! Humility.....? Great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 June 2015

I owe you My God! For cleaning the dirt of hate! Now it’s up to you, the writer of fate! ........excellent idea I like best. A beautiful poem nicely penned. Many thanks dear sir, may God increase your poetic thoughts. ....10.

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