An Affair To Remember Comments

when it comes to strangers passing in the night, then memories are made; an experience of the itinerant traveller.. like this poem - excellent xxPenny

Good content, just needs a little polish.

5. Good: specific details, an attempt to convey an experience. Bad: The cliched bits (expressing love in the same stale ways it's been done thousands - millions? - of times before.) Potential. But needs work.

About a moment that's really easy to relate to.

Like the story attribute, but the flow just isn't there

Interesting, and it tells a story - but not my favorite.