Monday, June 25, 2007

An Adventure Comments

Rating: 5.0

Close your eyes and come with me
I'll lead you by the arm
Have faith in me that I won't go
A place to cause you harm
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Dee Daffodil
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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 August 2007

Dee Oh it is the same hot seat am i to embark upon that lures to oecanic vast juxtaposed to my friend reveling so first and beyond leads to land to meet the moon l anding upon, ! ! ! ! ! ! unique one

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Barry Van Allen 26 June 2007

Dee, HO! - HUM! ... Just ordinary stuff, just like I always love, Pleeeze, don't wake me up! , I want to see how it ends up. ... Don't set that damned alarm clock! ... unless you mean it! ! ! B.V.A.

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Zen Bojczuk 26 June 2007

Hey where did that Jimmy Buffett music come from? Changes in latitude.... So many nights I just dream of the ocean. God I wish I was sailin’ again... Sometimes I too wish I could just sail away... I think I just did. Thanks Captain Dee. Zen

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Diane Violet 25 June 2007

Love where this adventure lead Dee...Hugs, Diane

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Francesca Johnson 25 June 2007

This sounds like one of my visualised journeys.. But don't you sometimes feel like taking off, leaving the world behind and doing just what's in your poem? A nice piece of escapism, Dee. Glad to see you're back on form. Love, Fran xxx

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