Monday, September 10, 2018

An Adult Bed-Wetter Comments

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Her sleep-fuddled mind
In a sleep-deprived body
Holding a full bladder
Assured her
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Valsa George 28 September 2018

This is a painful condition! It puts the hapless victim into a miserable sense of shame of which he/she cannot do anything!

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asoke kumar mitra 11 September 2018

ah, great write.can feel the poem.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 September 2018

Thanks, Asoke Da, for commenting. I sincerely appreciate it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2018

The next moment was an eye-opener for her.....is the epitome of this beautiful poem dear madam! Appreciated the essence of the work! (10)

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 September 2018

Thanks, Dr.Swain for your wonderful comment.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 September 2018

Oh! O' age You've given a fanciful kingdom You've given elated youth You've given all in dry and wet but now its your ship and I on your shipwrecked, fierce iceberg all around me!

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 September 2018

Oh! O' age You've given a fanciful kingdom You've given elated youth You've given all in dry and wet but now its your ship and I on your shipwrecked, fierce iceberg all around me!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 September 2018

Thanks, Nathan, for your hearty appreciation.

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