An Admission Of Truth Comments

your easy flow... voice in words lets us know how you value us............

Hi David, Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I've enjoyed several of yours. I think if we can come close to making people know how and what we are feeling, we have accomplished something. But writing something that really sticks in someone's mind is such a compliment. Good Luck, Mike

A sorry attempt it most certainly isn't. Humility, wit and fine penning (plus sentiments shared by many) all in one... grand. t x

Drat...I wish I'd written this one! ! ! Hugs, Dee

Hello David, I like this poem, I like the humour in it and the message you are trying to convey..... I think we all feel like that about our work, if only one day we will leave one to be remembered by.... Great concept and an interesting read! HG: -) xx

David, let me be the first to say that this is great. First you've captured how we all feel about our work. Our hopes, aspiration, dreams. Yes, it is all there and more and the writing is good as well. Thanks for sharing it. I gave it a 10 because it deserves it. David