Thursday, November 5, 2009

An Addict's Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a junkie after a fix I am back here again.
Longings so intense my body trembles with wanting.
The need so great I can hardly stand straight.
Why do I torture myself this way?
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Tiffny Rhodius
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Eyan Desir 07 November 2009

Beautiful..really wow your needs wiil never be satisfied in one nite sorry... your passion is to great

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Fired Heart 06 November 2009

I really liked this, such yearning and submission. I have written poem called Cruise Control which is simular to this but not as profound as this, but I think you would enjoy it and I would like to know what you think of it :)

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Adeline Foster 05 November 2009

Tiffny: Having recently returned to Maryland from Guyana, this fascinated me. I half expected it to reveal in the end the demon 'Rum'. Please read some of mine. I did write one when I was there called Guyana Voices. I was there for three months staying on the West Band Demerara. Adeline Foster

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