An Addict's Dream Comments
It was midnight hours as he laid,
Listening to the clock which just struck twelve,
Rolling over the dirty floor
With ever intense pain,
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you're so creative in ideas. thanks for sharing poetry in complete depth.
This is a serious poem with sense for some. You do well in selecting words for your message. Whenever you try to write about pain your words have the power to reveal it. Well done Indranil. I loved it
There is nothing simple in this piece, it is beautifully compassionate, with a grand use of language... a touching piece.....tyvm karen
I also really like this poem! It has the same build and construction as the other that I commented on. I really enjoy the feelings behind it and behind the different lines. Love it!
This is brilliant, described so well. Another favourite poet. Thank you
lovely...........another greatr poem from you sir.............again great and beautiful imagery wonderful use of phrases and expressions.........beautifully composed :)
Another masterpiece... the thoughts of an addict during midnight hours from darkness, transforming into light.
this is a very good poem from a very good poet.......i love the poems
Well written...faith strengthen our hopes in times of difficulties.. Keep sharing. Nice day everyone!
a sheer depiction of an intoxicated mind when he is lying between consciousness and unconsciousness. great one, indranil.
This kind of spontaneity has rare parallels here in this form dear poet. Thoughts clothed in these fine lines have to withstand the test of time over here and I am sure your poetic devices have an alluring charm that strengthens the very development of subsequent thought planks as you proceed from line to line...
There is beauty in your lines, and it comes from within.Enjoyed it.
te message is clar even in the addicting on of life's dream hope is asill a hope. a poem with great ideas
Almost no one cares about what an addict thinks or dreams but you do. Well done. I like it
I'm sure many poets can relate to addiction...the despair and loss of hope...well done portrayal my friend. you write powerfully, your phrases can pierce the minds of the readers. again, great job here!
Theatrical poetic scenery carved by words...you did an excellent job portray such realistic images in your poem_Soul
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7/19/2025 11:24:35 PM # 1.0.0
An Addict in the death throws of his addiction and unable to break away from this mighty power. Whenever just an inkling of light appears out of the overwhelming darkness then such a one reaches for the light. Then pulls oneself out from under. An excellent write of overcoming!