^ An Acutely Obtuse Pythagorean Lyric Comments

Ha! Defiantly adds up !

A clever story and clever word play. I'm afraid I missed a majority of the puns or allusions. I have a poem in development which you will enjoy. For now check out my poem Prime.

you were right, I so enjoyed reading it... love it! thank you for the comments on my poetry...

You definitely have a certain flair when it comes to poetry and mathematics. Very enjoyable read.

This has it all including time travel or messages for the the future unknown. Acute poem not at all diagonal, as it gets to the point.

Very witty Adeline and insightful!

Still laughing soooooooooooo funny and yet informative Loved it : 0) P

Hee hee hee. What a cleverly written poem. I love it.

Very clever! You might like 'Zero Forces Infinity'... Terry

Hurray! A terrific poem with rhyme at prime with humor at the helm. When poets write Adeline is my favorite poet and I just took it for granted but after reading this poem, I feel the same. ha ha ha a good poem Adeline! Hope you catch up this poem of mine........ The Lonely Train on the Lonely Track with 24 Coaches Painted Black

Indeed not! Terrific, and told with inticate rhyme and great humour. 'the triangle turned out to be a square' just another fundamental flaw in the universe exposed.

Not only science but mathematics is just an expression of poetry is evident from this creation yours here.Nice one and superb write.

As a math hater, I still fully enjoyed this. Adeline, you are to be commended for this..(smile)

I love this clever piece of wit. Needs to be in some math books.

There is an oxymoron in the title 'An Acutlely Obtuse Pythagorean Lyric'. I am assuming that this poem is referring to a^2 + b^2 = c^2 'To tell him why the triangle turned out to be a square.' Where the hypotenuse is c c = (a^2+b^2) ^(1/2) in this case the hypotinuse is the root I like poems about mathematics so I maybe bias and its a 10/10. Excellent.

Adeline, you must be good with your math and geometry coz a poem like these can't be written by a math-hater! ! ! hilarious yet intriguing....

A pun in poetic form. Apparently A few voters have been much harder on this little gem than they should have. I give this little crossover a ten

Hi Adeline, This poem turns math into a story.Excellent!

Almost Pi- fect. π .