Thursday, January 19, 2012

An Act Of Tragedy And Comedy Comments

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AN ACT OF TRAGEDY AND COMEDY
We all were born crying
Came Into the world
From that day onward
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Bri Edwards 22 December 2020

" Man tries to creat" create " God the Gretest of All dramatists Greatest Writes His scene with pricision" precision maybe you just need to more carefully proofread before and after submitting. line 21 Try " alternation" ** ** noun " the repeated occurrence of two things in turn" dear god, For me, crying due to happiness is 'good'; with pain or sadness is 'bad'! I prefer laughter. bri :)

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John wake 22 January 2012

nice message i have a similar poem called support

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