Over the lips,
through the gums,
as I pull the trigger,
my shotgun hums.
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it sounds like a nursery rhyme gone wrong.. i mean that in a good way.
Very fluid... You make death sound musical and beautiful...Free of fear and hesitation... Your poems are very lucid and your message is very clear. You are an excellent writer; Glad to have read you...you are right about the similarities... thanks, k
you u are officulaay my favorite poet