Tuesday, October 17, 2006

An Act Of Patricide Comments

Rating: 5.0

Over the lips,
through the gums,
as I pull the trigger,
my shotgun hums.
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Joshua Fegley
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Dawn Lambert 07 October 2013

you u are officulaay my favorite poet

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Kali D 03 January 2007

it sounds like a nursery rhyme gone wrong.. i mean that in a good way.

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Amelie Anonymous 30 December 2006

Intense....I love it

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kAy BaRCeLon 21 October 2006

Very fluid... You make death sound musical and beautiful...Free of fear and hesitation... Your poems are very lucid and your message is very clear. You are an excellent writer; Glad to have read you...you are right about the similarities... thanks, k

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