An Acre Of Land Comments

(cont.) ...Where we need no perfume nor our dead noses.......nor or for? ? either way, it is not clear what you mean here. i guess the poem is not to be taken 'literally'! bri :) p.s. i read your responses to previous comments though i did not read all comments. if you wish to respond here to my comment, fine, but i probably won't see it unless you also send to me as a message.

first, i just left another comment in which i 'welcomed' you to PH. but NOW i've looked at your list of poems, with dates of submissions and find some going back to 2012, i think the year i started here! (cont.) ...

A beautiful poem. I have read and reread this poem and I can't help but feel there is a desire to escape something. Would I want to create a self-contained prison or an opportunity to develop to grow.

A brilliant and thought provoking poem is presented here. Getting a land with no boarder and with golden sky is fortune. Amazing drafting is shared here.10