Friday, July 10, 2009

An Aching Silence Comments

Rating: 2.7

The night has been dead without you around,
the silence makes me think of things that i shouldn't anymore..

It's been past for a while,
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Ana Z. M.
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Ying Escalona 24 July 2009

yes, the flow is smooth..touching and romantic.....but remember. time heals a broken heart

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Kesav Easwaran 10 July 2009

'...you used to be a part of me, and now, i am incomplete'... expression emotion rich...well written piece Ana...conveys very well the heart ache youngters often feel in love affairs...thanks...10

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 July 2009

Very well expressed poem. Yes your last line is true and last verse is good. Very well crafted with nice feel and flow.

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