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i think its the poets desire to remain in a state of happiness. A good work.

This reads as an early work before you really got to grips with your punctuation, it is that which makes your poetry flow in other readings

a live dramatization before lord. you set a tone which tells clearly the mood.

in dilemma, confused, can't decide the decision to take at a point in time, reasoning death as the only solution, this is the exact condition 80% of humans found theirselves.......good work bro.

a poet like should never think to leave. you are pearl of poetry and you should go on.10