An Accident And Paradise Lost... Comments

such a powerful moving piece...10+++++

I share your sadness as I read your well-chosen words...skillfully written.

I to sincerely hope this is a figment of your imagination a lovely but tragic well worded poem my friend

As always I see passion and that is what makes a poem and poem.

The last stanza has power.

I can feel your agony too Kafil.Its a definitely a human tragedy.Be strong is what you need.

A moving account. Nice doing!

Hi Kafil, You've penned a sad verse here, that does a good job of conveying the loss the writer feels. I hope this isn't drawn from your own real life experiences. Cheers, Frank

A well written touching piece, Kafil.

Touching poem. well penned.