Saturday, October 24, 2009

An Absolutely Perfect Presence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see,
in she strides,
the white-clad love of my life
sweet lover not my wife,
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Terri Turrell 20 November 2009

This is quite musical, Your word choices apply just the right blend of assonance and consonance. Lovely piece. =)

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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

Really breathtaking poetics. Really loved this.

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Tai Chi Italy 27 October 2009

So true and so beautifully expressed by the 'I' in you. Smiling at you your absolutely perfect presence! Tai

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Juniper March 25 October 2009

Still beautiful? Oh yes always so, always this poem is perfect just the detail I needed to be happy forever with my puzzle clue great work

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Lorenzo Costigliolo

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