An Abode Of God Comments
To that unique and peerless place
I had been once
And twice did I try to venture out but miserably failed
Though a decade and half there I stayed
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A very beautiful revealing work.The flow is fantastic, well executed write. The memories are vividly captured by beautiful images.10
Many many thanks..........Rose Marie...........I am humbled
as a little star Held it life was always lively and happier Left it life fell like withering flowers Petal by petal whisked away by time into that garden of memories- - - - - - - this fantastic poem is chock full of such beautiful and meaningful images- - - - - - - - -10+++++++++++++++++++++++
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8/1/2025 10:48:48 PM # 1.0.0
Many can relate to your wonderfully crafted poem: the childhood years: that is the time when we all felt closer to Heaven and the Divine than ever.
Many many thanks....Pirjol.........I am humbled