Wednesday, December 16, 2020

An Abandoned Dog By Cousin Dale Thomas And Edited Very Lightly By Susan Williams Comments

Rating: 5.0

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No one wants me
and no one cares...
my coat is all matted
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Susan Williams
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 December 2022

Dale you have touched my heart strings all I can say I a starting to weep

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 December 2022

and study the minds of men and know a scared little doggy would never commit such a sin.....true.

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This is wonderful stuff! Anyone who could write this must have other worthwhile poems to share. Tell Cousin Dale, get off your bale! Don't wait another day to send more poems our way!

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Anjandev Roy 06 April 2022

This is unique and excellent throughout....

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Anjandev Roy 06 April 2022

This is unique and excellent throughout

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 December 2020

A sad poem of an abandoned dog. But i am happy that it is now in heaven, safe and secure. A poem that deserves all stars.

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Susan Williams 03 January 2021

Thank you for your comments! I will show my cousin this and maybe he will join up with PH.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2020

A deeply heart breaking poem! .. Such sorrow to read! ... Maybe this will make hearts think twice about how animals that should be so loved and dear are left to suffer oh so alone! .. Thank you for sharing this with/from Dale! .. Definite 5 Stars ++++++++..................................................

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Susan Williams 03 January 2021

My cousin Dale does not seem to think he has enough talent to share his work outside the family. I think he has a sweet gentle voice that he should share with others.

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Susan Williams 03 January 2021

I will show him these responses and hopefully he will join us or some other poetry group. Thank you for giving this top marks!

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Varsha M 16 December 2020

So painful. The pathetic abandonment. So nicely written. The hopeful.waiting that was never rewarded....the dirty truth that they left the little one there all alone in darkness... horrifyingly he tried to fight and fight only to finally depart....good poetry

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Susan Williams 03 January 2021

What a beautiful compliment to my cousin's poem and his sweet tender heart.. I can't wait to show him the responses to his poem! He doesn't think he is a good enough poet to share his works. Thank you for letting him know differently!

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