Amusment Park Comments

Yes I can't agree more. Amusement parks are real fun where you can scream your heart out. A beautiful subject closer to my heart.

A beautiful and highly meaningful poem.

one state of mind is not enough, one world is not enough, another one of your pearls.

the last lines are so good, , , , ,

Sarah...This is one fantastic poem. And yes, I have enjoyed the ride too!

Hi this poem is extremely enjoyable. while it is easy to digest it's still really well written. esp since most lines contrast each other, the juxtaposition is so clear: eg Coz Sometimes you find your serenity in a place filled with insanity keep penning!