Amputated Dreams Comments

it is indeed a nice poem on a subject which i feel only a doctor can write with ease 10++

a well thought out poem...the imagery of terror you bring in here is applicable to many a motherlands of many of us here, Kamran...despite all these terrors around us, we prefer a smile Mona Lisa style...who knows what behind? 10

This is deep and incredible. Great Job.

I cannot understand this- lower limbs amputation inspite of this a Mona Lisa smile-- Maybe too much for my poor head whatever-a different style +10 regards anju

well u have presented a number of themes in this poem 'amputated dreams' and it's interesting to think abt them all

This is a finely crafted poem. I like the structure, too. The ending is wonderful, so poetic - /But still a Mona Lisa smile/Dances on the dry lips/ Of our dreams/ - these lines are so beautiful. I wish I had written them. Please keep writing.

Great thought. Great words. I liked the construction of small succinct lines so beautifully.....10

great piece, , , man Ric Dhodi

oh! wow........good one

it surely is a great poem shah sahib.....a 10 from me too thanks

My 10 for this excellent piece.

bravely written.................with great meaning

Your spirit has not been amputated. You have written a remarkable tribute.