Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Amorous Comments

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A mist of joy surrounds the area,
all those caught inside endure the most precious gift,
the one of having the most treasured emotion;
and having the one they truly love.
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Javier Falcon
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Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

the first stanza put me in on a surf board. alone with the tidal wave. alone with the memories being made. alone amongst a sea of living....but fulfilled. a great poem...kinda inspired me.

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May Namoc 02 July 2008

oh javier. u have captured the true essence on how i feel about you as well. its a wonderful poem, full of thoughts and feelings. its amazing. <333

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going under my favs... you just keep suprising me. x3, mill

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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