Amorous Penetration Comments

what John Legend does in song, you do in poetry. When I read your masterpieces I feel a bit hot *lol* yeah, so anyway, good job. eni da kid

Very affecting - consummate sensuality. Mmmmm......

Congrats Uriah. Great write. Love Ernestine XXX

(sigh) I think I need to go buy some jasmine, and I've never been one for jewelry but maybe I should start. lol You are a consummate poet. I can't even think of anything to say...I'm speechless. Simply beautiful, Uriah. Shannon xoxo

This poem has the mood of a French impressionistic painting, alight with the magic of the moment. Regards, Sandra Fowler

Again Uriah, so sensuously beautiful, I've been on a romantic writing kick myself of late, so I can totally relate to this. Very nice... -Eila

I coulde smell, hear, imagine and sense the passion in this piece! complete masterpiece! HBH

I like all the images here.........I could hear the jangling of the bracelets and smell the jasmine on a hot summer night. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

I just love Jasmine Uriah, such a sensuous scent, as is this lovely poem. 10 from liking this side of Uriahs artistic bent! grinning Tai