Thursday, June 21, 2018

Amorous Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

Another one I am in the reign of amorous heart
Beautiful day and night comes and goes with you
Clock of liking visits all through breathing birth
Deer of your mind catches my sight in running view
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Hfdhdfh Dsgsgdsg 11 July 2018

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

Wo o, what a brilliant poem inscribed by you having unique pattern beginning from alphabetically A to Z! The ending lines as bellow are much interesting. Yogi I am yet for your yearning love inside Zephyr flows everywhere for our together stride Thanks for sharing.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2018

A magnificent poem well crafted. Liked the style of writing. Very creative.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2018

again very original and creative

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2018

Mehtab is a knowledgeful poet, otherwise, it was not easy to write such a great poem in that lines are in alphabetic order.

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