Monday, March 6, 2006

Amore Comments

Rating: 4.0

A mouse, grey-coated, cute and male
had eyed an elephant's long tail.
He had been horny for some time
and was prepared to risk the climb.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Emancipation Planz 13 March 2009

Amore.. haha j'adore.. tis got some of my FAV words tree, pee, toe, blow..... and I laugh...: ~)

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Emma Johnson 16 March 2006

I get drunk on laughter. Thanks for that. A beautiful story in brilliant verse. Susie.

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kskdnj sajn 06 March 2006

This was naughty. :)

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Raynette Eitel 06 March 2006

Very, very funny, Herbert. Raynette

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Sandra Osborne 06 March 2006

10 Here... no slips... no screams! LOL... Good Job! CS

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David Darbyshire 06 March 2006

I like this poem, it's funny, good and full of imagination, this is the way to go....Herb...have a nice day dave

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Gina Onyemaechi 06 March 2006

Whoops, finger slipped! Voted in a 10 instead. Hope you don't mind! G.

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Gina Onyemaechi 06 March 2006

Oh but Herbie, where DO you dream these ideas from? Ha ha ha! Smiling at you with a score of...9, Gina.

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