Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Amongst The Red Reeds (A Sonnet.) Comments

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The striking scarlet standard swings so low
Over the blue, broken bodies of men
The sun becomes cold and loses it’s glow
Across the awful, bloodstained fields and fen
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J.A McManus
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Obinna Eruchie 06 February 2010

A lovely sonnet with a drawn picture of the sun setting over the dead bodies of men for the day to depart and the night to take over, and there is mourning across the land. As usual, day where there is life represents life, and night where there is dark represents death.

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Meggie Gultiano 18 January 2010

a nice sharing. Lovely verses

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