Amongst Fern And Nettles Comments

...I feel now as one with the whole of creation In a land that's untamed and so wild and so free... ....................................................................... Andrew, It is very beautifully written, the melancholy even paints yours to pathos here... To you 10 from me. Kindest regards, Tsira

This is; beautifully penned Andrew, with so much insite of what your heart and mind see with your eyes as you create such a magnificent potrait of Nature's Beauty at her best, but inside you are seaching still.... I can feel this... Bonnie

Do I detect a hint of melancholy in the last stanza? It certainly works to give an emotional depth to this essentially pastoral scene (beautifully crafted, I might add) . Your line 'where the clouds leave their shadows' is enchanting. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

a poem that merges with Nature and that feels the Creator...a good one

Wonderful poem depciting paradise on Earth makes one and all enjoy with pleasure. I feel a blissful time spent in Nature on reading this beautiful poem!

A wonderful poem written so tenderly! Th' imagery is fascinating - this beauty you see! ! Best wishes Andrew! *10*! ! Friend Thad