Among The Ashes Comments

Bodies Burn In Funeral Pyres spent bodies burning in funeral pyres leaving soul free to freedom leave liberating sparks fly as ash upon wind roaming wind has no boundaries soul free to wind ride distant locations dust explores simultaneously multiple locations free wind sings songs of undreamed of sights solar wind carries us home among distant stars our soul journey extends into galaxies infinities Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Among The Ashes' by the poet Stefanie Fontker. Dedicated to the poet Stefanie Fontker.

Liberating Sparks Fly As Ash Upon Wind spent bodies burning in funeral pyres leaving soul free to freedom leave liberating sparks fly as ash upon wind Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Among The Ashes' by the poet Stefanie Fontker. Dedicated to the poet Stefanie Fontker.

Freedom Wind Constrained By No Boundaries roaming wind has no boundaries soul free to wind ride distant locations dust explores simultaneously multiple locations Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Among The Ashes' by the poet Stefanie Fontker. Dedicated to the poet Stefanie Fontker.

Our Soul Journey Extends Into Galaxies Infinities free wind sings songs of undreamed of sights solar wind carries us home among distant stars our soul journey extends into galaxies infinities Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Among The Ashes' by the poet Stefanie Fontker. Dedicated to the poet Stefanie Fontker.

bodies burn in funeral pyres, leaving soul free to freedom leave, liberate sparks as ash upon the wind, the wind has no boundaries, soul free to wind ride distant locations, dust explores multiple locations simultaneously, the wind sings songs of undreamed of sights, solar wind carries us home among stars, our journey extends into galaxies infinities

Even if the lover would come back to search fory your face among the ashes, the wind will carry you away, no chance for you to to stay. Impressive write, thank you dear friend loved it very much,10.

The is poem is amazing. Like all your poems, it is well written, keep it up

I really enjoyed the ending of this one.

Very nice to read...so touching... there's something in it that is so so touching... 'Would you come back To search for my face Among the ashes? 'Woww

immortality expressed in few verses i like the part when you said, i will never cease to exist for i will be carried past you by the wind wow

soft, strong, and eternal... with a sadness. good poetry!