Friday, June 10, 2005

Among Tall Pine Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out among the tall pine trees,
with a view that could spill
over if it wasn’t so profoundly
controlled by the dark ditches,
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Seán O Muiríosa
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Ernestine Northover 29 April 2006

I like your style Sean, expressed very eloquently, and great content. Good read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Dan Tharp 11 March 2006

For a 19 year old, your poetry has substance. Good job. dan

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Amberlee Carter 10 June 2005

' I sit, writing poetry of a faceless sky and thinking of the trees: our season in this walk is not unlike theirs; we spend so much time in a twilight daze, praying for a warmth we can grow towards' Forgive me for quoting myself, I just wanted to show you how well I can relate to this poem. Your work is growing quite nicely..this piece has a strudy foundation..it's fine read my friend...

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Ivy Christou 10 June 2005

Seán this poem is awesome.. I could follow the flow of your thoughts as if they were mine. The ending you chose is also amazing and powerful and doesn't let the reader down.. well done! HBH

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