Amoeba Messages Comments

Amusingly fascinating... Well observed my friend, people give amoebic gifts... Hanuman tales, is it the Hindu God?

Your thoughts are excellent. The imageries keeps the reader agape. Keep writing

witnessing amoeba in terms of time....interestingly knitted.

Time and tide waits for none.Man rush to keep in track with time.This poem highlights the deteriorating moral values in the modern world during the mans rush. Good work.Keep writing.

very well written Rekha :) yes..the man of the stone age lived and enjoyed actually more than us! But I cudnt get..wat ameoba messages is... explain plz..

Sound so scientific hahaha I love this piece... :) i agree all people here say but Bernard i want give it double marks :) ..The part of Hanuman make me laugh a little it sounds like a modern tale :) Amoeba Messages? what a title a lil hook there to read :) :) i like and like it more_Unwritten Soul

Beautiful poem indicating the degrading moral values in the society. The rise of cosumerism has pushed back the old values of the society. Today's man is running after wealth and luxuries. He has forgotten his aim why he is sent in this world. I like the way you have composed the whole poem. Very poignant write indeed. Thanks for sharing..... A fine......10

This is so true. Time is such a constant message of speed and a servant of capitalism, I thank God I am not a materialist and my only concern is for a time to dream and create poetry. Thank you for this lovey write. Ron.

a very insightful poem on todays lifestyle. i for one am not an instant message kind of guy. i still prefer a face to face conversation enjoying the beauty of humanity. nicely done

I so agree with you on this poem. We are truly always in a rush it seems. This is a beautifully written poem Rekha! I'm definitely giving it a 10! Thanks for sharing such fine work! Keep it coming.

Great poem Rekha! I wish we could all put the brakes on the speed with which we do everything and learn from the lessons of our ancestors.

Is there anyone not to agree that man tries too hard to catch up with the speed we've got? Meanwhile loosing the essence of life? As time goes fast we have no chance to make memories and then after we've gone, the dear ones can only praise our bones.. Yes we need big changes, we need to stop, take time to look around and ask ourself: what's more important? Keeping up with speedy times or try let out the treasure of the heart? Love, with great love that's how we shall treat everything even the time! If time is loved may slow down and keep around, that is my hope.. 10.Thank you for share, good written poem, my dear friend!

True; abosolutely true. Man has no time, nowadays, for good thing in life. Plastic smiles in miles and hypocrism has vanished the goodness and what all remains a pales shadow of his former self. Narayanan.

This is a very nice poem. I think it has a very clear message that contains lots of wisdom. Somehow, I can feel the power and postive motion of a certain kindness movement. I think that the world is slowly getting better. Poems like this can certainly contribute to the kindness revolution