Amnesia - 5 Comments

MMMMMM! This is something........new experience with new form poetry......

Invited vices to eradicate and bloom and boom the already in-built virtues. A different way of expression from Amnesia 1. Ten+++

I love the way some of your readers are honest enough to say this is just jargon and we can't or don't want to understand it. Adeline

I ca't understand all the medical jargon. I'm gonna read another piece.

great share for us... all about these..such a great info We just have to prepare... when we reach Senescence Stage.. thanks for sharing 10+++ lovelots, Maia

jam packed with illness.........loss of memory in temporary or permanent state is a sad thing which makes a person blind from his life.....but to sum all these illness....old age (senescent) is the reason.......a terrible state which we have to face for your family and friends................Thanks!

Sorry I didnt really get this poem sorry

Overdosed, springs to mind here Dr! Turning our minds to rice pudding, is not recommended. Interesting about that softening bone condition, vitamin D! Sunshine, is the key Smiling at you Tai

very nice poem and in rich content...........

''What is a human being? We associate the concept of a human being with our highest values: Freedom, Love, Creativity, Insight, and Understanding. When we are free, when we love, when we create, when we have insight and understanding, we feel alive and our life has meaning. Only then are we really human''.-Lars Martensson. In contrast to those stated above this excellent abstract poem describes almost perfect the human degradation.Thank you for sharing.10+++++++++

I am not familiar with certain technical terms but I can say about one thing. We need not invite certain conditions to forget the pains in life. Instead, we can view life as a Sthitha Pragna as described in Geetha to get over the pangs of pain. Our attitude towards life is all the more important. Pain and pleasure are mainly mental rather than pyhsical and material. What can be painful to me need not be the same for you. So, what is pain and pleasure? It all stems out of our reactions to situations. Reactions are important.

lovely poem with rich use of words surely a tenner from me

lovely poem dr sakti 10

great idea.beautiful poem. voted10 surya

Interesting indeed! fine diction! 10+

Great great really great i will live for ever with this poem.10+++++

i like ur playing with words its excellent although i could not get ur point in it. why life is so unbearable that one has to drink a pot of amnesia ? i dont like it happen to you or anyone... 10++ ST, Tha

Mr. AB [From where ever u dropped] why do u want to raise and strecth an issue that was totally uncalled..for u! U can comment on the poet and his poem on the particular page...but not intimidatingly comment on my comment and intrude between the reader and poet......hence keep ur egocentric mind and ur uncultured comments out of the scene......u r suggestions are unwanted dump em dowm the pit! ! ! ! ! ! !

Look who's talking....the one who cannot spell my name correctly.... Patients of schizophrenia...pls keepout! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I agree with Seema Aralla poetic dyslexia who has Poetic Anorexia! ! Hope SM will agree! Ten++ AB London